November 6, 2006
{This is from a project a class did with Sonia Sanchez.}
{I use three lines to make a poem}
[Manifest destiny is what I called it. Cold stained the walls. By luck you can catch another.]
I revised it on October 11, 2010.
So now this goes out to all my great god sent friends.
Running through a field of cold hearts are what I dream of.
In the summer I swim in shoulder high banks of blood.
And in winter cold stained the walls
Once in a while you will find a friend fit for a queen’s child
By luck you can catch another
That will swim dance fall into the same
Manifest destiny is what I called it
Others call them best friends
I call them god’s messengers
They whisper the truths of the world
Turn your dreams
Steal your last drop of love
Testing your ability
All God’s messengers
And you’ll be lucky to catch one
Highly gifted with two
Steal your last drop of love.
ReplyDeleteI've never looked at it that ways, but you are correct in your line of thought.